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Léopold Sédar Senghor, the Senegalese
poet and statesman, leading a life of mythic proportions. |
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Léopold Sédar Senghor, the Senegalese
poet and statesman, led a life of mythic proportions. |
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Léopold Sédar Senghor, the
Senegalese poet and statesman, having led a life of mythic proportions. |
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Léopold Sédar Senghor, the Senegalese poet and statesman,
while leading a life of mythic proportions. |
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Léopold Sédar Senghor, the Senegalese
poet and statesman, in order to lead a life of mythic proportions. |
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Born in a small West African village in 1906, |
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Born, in a small West African village in 1906, |
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Born in a small, West African village in 1906, |
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Born, in a small West African village, in 1906, |
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Born in a small, West, African village in 1906, |
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Senghor had directed a movement against French colonial |
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Senghor directed a movement against French colonial |
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Senghor directing a movement against French colonial |
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Senghor to direct a movement against French colonial |
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Senghor by directing a movement against French colonial |
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rule that bringed Senegal independence in 1959. |
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rule that had bringed Senegal independence in 1959. |
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rule that did bringed Senegal independence in 1959. |
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rule that would of brought Senegal independence
in 1959. |
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frule that brought Senegal independence
in 1959. |
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Senghor served as Senegal’s first elected president
from 1960 to 1980. |
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Senghor served as, and was officially, Senegal’s
first elected president from 1960 to 1980. |
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Senghor won the election and served as Senegal’s
first elected president from 1960 to 1980. |
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Senghor was voted in and served as Senegal’s
first elected president from 1960 to 1980. |
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Senghor campaigned and served as Senegal’s first
elected president from 1960 to 1980. |
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Because of Senghor’s political influence,
therefore, Senegal |
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Thus, because of Senghor’s political
influence, therefore, Senegal |
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Consequently, due to Senghor’s political
influence, therefore, Senegal |
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Because of Senghor’s political influence, Senegal |
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On account of Senghor’s political
influence, therefore, Senegal consequently |
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is today one of Africa’s most stable
and affluent nations. |
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is today one of Africa’s most rock
steady and rich nations. |
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is today one of Africa’s most stubborn and moneyed
nations. |
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is today one of Africa’s most unflappable and
loaded nations. |
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is today one of Africa’s most imperturbable
and wealth-enhanced nations. |
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After World War II, Senghor has entered politics |
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After World War II, Senghor entered politics |
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After World War II, Senghor having entered
politics |
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After World War II, Senghor was going
to enter politics |
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After World War II, Senghor had been going to enter
politics |
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and held a number of elected positions in France and
Senegal between 1946 and 1959. |
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and held a number of positions in France
and Senegal between 1946 and 1959. |
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and held some important jobs in France and Senegal
between 1946 and 1959. |
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and held a number of different positions in France
and Senegal between 1946 and 1959. |
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and held a number (two or three) of elected positions
in France and Senegal between 1946 and 1959. |
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During this time, working ceaselessly |
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During this time, having worked ceaselessly |
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During this time, he, working ceaselessly |
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During this time, he worked ceaselessly |
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During this time, to work ceaselessly |
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in African independence movements, all the while it
emphasizes the importance of African cultural identity. |
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in African independence movements, all
the while it emphatic of the importance of African cultural identity. |
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in African independence movements, all the while had
it emphasized the importance of African cultural identity. |
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in African independence movements, all the while emphasis
was placed on the importance of African cultural identity. |
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in African independence movements, all the while emphasizing
the importance of African cultural identity. |
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Senghor's efforts contributed to Charles de Gaulle’s |
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Senghors efforts contributed to Charles
de Gaulle’s |
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Senghors’ efforts contributed to Charles de
Gaulle’s |
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Senghors efforts’ contributed to Charles de
Gaulle’s |
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Senghors effort’s contributed to Charles de
Gaulle’s |
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grant of national sovereignty to Senegal and other
West African countries in 1959. |
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grant of national sovereignty, to Senegal
and other West African countries in 1959. |
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grant, of national sovereignty to Senegal and other
West African countries in 1959. |
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grant of, national sovereignty to Senegal and other
West African countries, in 1959. |
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grant of national sovereignty, to Senegal and other
West African countries, in 1959. |
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One legend about Senghor claim |
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One legend about Senghor have claimed |
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One legend about Senghor had claims |
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One legend about Senghor has claims |
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One legend about Senghor claims |
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that at the moment of his birth, a tree on the ground
fell and split, |
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that at the moment of his birth, a tree
on the ground split and fell, |
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that at the moment of his birth, a tree split and
fell to the ground, |
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that at the moment of his birth, the falling ground
split a tree, |
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that a tree at the moment of his birth split the earth
and fell to the ground, |
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releasing a great spirit that entered the newborn’s
body. |
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releasing a great spirit that plundered
the newborn’s body. |
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releasing a great spirit that violated the newborn’s
body. |
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releasing a great spirit that charmed the newborn’s
body. |
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releasing a great spirit that invaded the newborn’s
body. |
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Senghor himself did not believe this story, true or
not, |
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Senghor himself did not believe this story.
True or not, |
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Senghor himself did not believe this story, true,
or not, |
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Senghor himself did not believe this story true, or
not, |
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Senghor himself did not believe this story true or
not, |
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the tale on the other hand gives an appropriately |
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the tale consequently gives an appropriately |
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the tale nevertheless gives an appropriately |
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the tale otherwise gives an appropriately |
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the tale objectively gives an appropriately |
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mythic dimension to the life of a man honored |
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mythic dimension to the life for a man
honored |
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mythic dimension to the life whom a man honored |
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mythic dimension to the life by a man honored |
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mythic dimension to the life with a man honored |
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for his courageous and progressively work for the
freedom of African peoples. |
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for his courageous and progress work for
the freedom of African peoples. |
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for his courageous and progressed work for the freedom
of African peoples. |
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for his courageous and progression work for the freedom
of African peoples.. |
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for his courageous and progressive work for the freedom
of African peoples. |
21) |
The writer wants to add a sentence that would introduce the second
paragraph’s discussion of Senghor's activities prior to becoming
president of Senegal. Which of the following sentences would best
achieve this effect? |
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Educated in Dakar and Paris, Senghor began his career
as a teacher in France. |
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Senghor goes on to head Senegal’s
independent government for twenty years. |
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Senghor was never a very superstitious man. |
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Senghor's father was a prosperous merchant in the
small village of Joal. |
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Senghor was the first president of the independent
Senegal. |
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If the writer were to eliminate the information in
paragraph 3 that Senghor himself did not believe the story about
the tree, the essay would primarily lose: |
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a sense of Senghor’s skeptical nature. |
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insight into African politicians’
beliefs. |
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an illustration of one way a spirit can be released. |
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a suggestion of the admiration Senghor inspired. |
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the implication that all African myths involve nature. |
